Next Big Thing

by sarahenni on January 4, 2013

Now that I’ve managed to cobble together a draft of the WiP I feel pretty proud of, I finally feel confident enough to answer questions about it! I was tagged for this forever ago, by the lovely Caroline, who borrowed them from Miss Snark!

(Also! I’m blogging about fun accessories to kick off a year of glorious reads at Bestie Megan’s lovely style blog today! Check it out if you dig reading and pretty things.)

Q&A

What’s the working title for your book? Uuuuugh I don’t know! The title I’ve been working with for more than a year is simply terrible. I need to work on the title and the query next… blerg! (Right now the working title on the draft is HATERS TO THE LEFT. I may stand by that.)

What is the one sentence synopsis for your book? A girl who can see auras uses her ability to start a matchmaking business at her high school, and in the process gains—and loses—more than she ever expected.

What genre does your book fall under? Contemporary YA

What other books would you compare your story to in your genre? This is sort of a nerve-wracking question! I’d say that books I emulated in tone or setting would be The Disenchantments by Nina LaCour and Lola and the Boy Next Door by Stephanie Perkins.

Where did the idea come from for your book? I was thinking of myth retellings, and I wondered how a modern-day Cupid would fare in love. The idea of a high-schooler who could tell what people were compatible raised all kinds of questions: What would they think about fate? How would they deal with the fact that incompatible people fall in love all the time? I took the idea from there and ran with it.

Which actors would you choose to play your characters in a movie rendition? Ooh! Fun question. Creepily enough, I based my mental image of my main character Anya on these photobooth pics of Zooey Deschanel from high school—but Anya wears big glasses, like Zooey does now. However, until time machine casting becomes a very real and amazing thing, I’d have to say my favorite is always Kaya Scoledario, a.k.a. Effy from the BBC’s Skins.

For the love interest, Paul, casting would be a little tricky. Paul is half-Japanese, half-Italian. There aren’t a ton of actors I know of who fit that description (and I just got sucked into a rather dangerous NSFW internet wormhole searching for one). I have a friend who matches the description (but I’m not putting his picture here because awkward) and there are some similarities, strangely, to the not-Asian-at-all Garret Hedlund in that one specific picture–mostly Garrett’s fantastic hair. Paul definitely has the hair. If anyone has casting suggestions, please share!

Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency? I plan on seeking agent representation for this book in the (very near) future, so my hope is to go that way. But never say never, right?

How long did it take you to write the first draft of your manuscript? May we see an intro? FOR-EV-ER. But really, about a year and a half. I had what I consider a “zero draft” (technically a complete manuscript, but so poor that it had to be completely rewritten) after about six months. The rest of that time was spent rewriting and revising my heart out.

As for an intro, here’s the first paragraph as it stands now (these things are always, always revised or scrapped completely but hey):

       There are a couple dozen ways I’d prefer to heartbrokenly wallow after being dumped by world-class douchenozzle Shane Curran. They all involve eating Marianne’s horchata ice cream with my best friend Rainer. None, not a one, has me driving two hours inland to California’s Central Valley to help my mother arm a bunch of computer engineers with Segways and heavy polo mallets in the name of fledgling romance. And yet, here I am.

What else about your book might pique a reader’s interest? If you like stories about keeping Santa Cruz weird, high school rock bands, female friendships,  dreamily witty nerd boys, or orange Vespas, (see also: this Pinterest board) I think you might enjoy my book!

And I’d love to pass the torch, so I’ll tag my ladies Kate Hart, Jessica Love, Jessica BS, and Linsdey Culli!

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2012 Retrospective

by sarahenni on December 31, 2012

Inspired by Kate Hart’s incredible YA Highway 2012 Wrap-Up, I thought I’d throw together a reflection on what has been a pretty amazing year.

JANUARY

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- I went on a honeymoon to New Zealand and Australia, and got to meet fellow YA Highway member Leila Austin and her adorable baby!

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- When I returned I read my favorite book of the year, John Green’s The Fault in Our Stars, and got the chance to see John and Hank Green during the book tour’s stop in D.C.! (Pictured above: Jessica Sheehan and Rick Lipman)

FEBRUARY

- I partnered with my buddies Erin Bowman and Tracey Neithercott to introduce the Go Away, I’m Reading book covers, which sort of took off… By far, that was my most popular blog post of the year!

- I was also so psyched to put up my new blog header, illustrated by the crazy-awesome Noelle Stephenson, a.k.a. Gingerhaze, who recently got herself a book deal and illustrated the cover for Rainbow Rowell’s new book, Fangirl!

MARCH

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- Dr H and I moved to a new apartment, with our trusty new companion Hammer

- The Hunger Games movie basically exploded my life. I got so excited that I started having weird-ass dreams about the movie, and I blogged about it so much that a Swedish television station interviewed me about Hunger Games mania in the U.S. I also hosted a premiere day watch party with the DC MafYA, and the movie review as well as Bestie Danielle’s and my analysis of the portrayal of Gale and Peeta were among the biggest posts of the year on this here blog.

APRIL

- I freaked out with joy and pride when fellow YA Highwayer, DC MafYA-er and general IRL bestie Sumayyah sold her book, Begin Again, to Julia Strauss-Gabel at Penguin!

- Dr H had a birthday! Yay!

MAY

- Dr. H graduated from medical school, Bestie Megan had a gorgeous wedding in Louisville, Kentucky, and I had White Castle for the first time!

JUNE

- I attended BookExpo America with some other most excellent ladies from D.C.

JULY

- Bestie Danielle had a superfun wedding in the Bay Area of California! I got to eat more In N Out!

- I spent a few days in Colorado at the first (of many, I hope!) YA Highway writing retreat. The time spent there completely jump-started my creative process.

AUGUST

- I finished the first (decent) draft of my WiP in more than a year. And celebrated via .gif. Woo!

- I got awkwardly obsessed with Battlestar Galactica

SEPTEMBER

- Revising revising revising playing flag football revising

OCTOBER

- Revising revising Hurricane Sandy revising revising

NOVEMBER

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- Said goodbye to the Twilight movie franchise with some amazing friends (Veronica, Erin, and Lindsey)

- Organized the YA Highway Carpool Lane e-mail campaign to encourage everyone participating in NaNoWriMo

DECEMBER

- Killed it at Karaoke with some DC MafYA buddies

- Survived the apocalypse!

- Finished the second major revision of the WiP (phew!)

- Discovered Pitch Perfect and became uncomfortably obsessed

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Holiday Road Trip Part Deux

by sarahenni on December 25, 2012

For everyone celebrating today, Merry Christmas! Loving the Holiday Road Trips this week–check out the original YA Highway post to see other people’s responses to one of the many prompts for today.

Best Sequel: Insurgent by Veronica Roth
The story of Tris, Four and their exploding world in Divergent was a pretty tough act to follow. But Insurgent goes full-bore into the complicated repercussions in an unflinching way. I came out with more questions than answers and, really, that’s what the second book in a trilogy is for!
Best Debut: Born Wickedby Jessica Spotswood
The alternate-universe historical setting got my imagination whirring, the brisk plot had me flipping pages, and the smart, charming love interest had me swooning. SO excited to see where the series goes!
Books Not Normally In My Wheelhouse That I Still Enjoyed: Gone Girl by Gillian Flynn
I only read a handful of adult books every year, and rarely are they psychological thrillers. But I had to check out the crazy hit of the summer and it was worth all the wild hype. Gillian Flynn’s style is sparse, relentless, compulsively readable, and I’m pretty psyched to hear that she’ll be publishing a YA soon also!
Best Book Cover: This is Not a Test by Courtney Summers / Eleanor & Park by Rainbow Rowell / The Disenchantments by Nina LaCour
CoversIt was really hard to choose this one! There was actually a ton of books with fantastic covers this year, but these three stood out. Though they’re so very different, they are all gorgeous and the all achieve exactly what book covers are meant to: they convey the feel of the books. Not easy to do!

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Holiday Road Trip: Best Books of the Year

by sarahenni on December 24, 2012

I’m so excited for the Holiday Road Trips this week–check out the original YA Highway post to see other people’s responses to one of the many prompts for today.

I’m going to answer: Best Book of 2012!

This answer is totally predictable, and yet…!

John Green, The Fault in Our Stars

I love books that make me laugh, and books that make me cry. Books that do both, and include incredible characters and makes me think about them for days, weeks, and months afterward… Those are the best. This year TFiOS was definitely the outstanding example of that kind of book.

Honorable Mention:

Kristin Cashore, Bitterblue

Speaking of books that made me think—Bitterblue hit me more like a thought experiment than a novel. How does a city/nation recover from a ruler that has manipulated their history, and the very idea they have of themselves? Cashore handled the question beautifully, and brought back some incredible characters that I’ll always love reading about. For fans of fantasy or any thoughtful story, I recommend.

Honorable Non-YA Mention:

Gabrielle Hamilton, Blood, Bones & Butter

Sometimes a favorite book is one that finds you at just the right time. This book came about at a time when I was hungry for a non-fiction story. I really wanted to immerse myself in someone’s real life, and Gabrielle Hamilton writes about her unconventional life with clarity and occasionally painful truth. It was engaging and challenging and has stuck with me like few memoirs have.

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Superlative Blogfest: Popularity Contest

by sarahenni on December 18, 2012

 

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* I feel the need to add a disclaimer that I have in fact been choosing from books that were not released in 2012. Oops! But these books were all ready by me in 2012, as you can see in this handy list from Goodreads!

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Superlative Blogfest: Head of the Class

by sarahenni on December 17, 2012

So excited today to participate in the Class of 2012: YA Superlatives Blogfest, hosted by Jessica Love, Katy Upperman, Alison Miller, and Tracey Neithercott. It’s always fun this time of year to reflect back on what awesomeness the books of 2012 held… and I just can’t resist a list.

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And if anyone is interested, here is the list of books I’ve read in 2012!

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Currently

by sarahenni on December 14, 2012

Currently…

Loving

 

Reconnecting! Something about the pervasive festiveness of the holiday spirit and the pending end of the world has a lot of people, myself included, in the mood to meet up, check in, find out how friends and acquaintances are doing. It’s been so refreshing to see wonderful familiar faces, and to meet some new friends, too! (Photo: some of the DC MafYA; Photo by Robin Talley)

Reading

 

The Hobbit by J. R. R. Tolkien. The story of Bilbo Baggins and the mysterious ring goes way, way, way back for me. My mother loves fantasy books, and we read this one together when I was very small. One of my first and most vivid memories of a movie was this (terrifying) 1977 animated version of The Hobbit which, needless to say, haunts me still:

I completely understand people who struggle to get into the rich, strange mythology of The Hobbit or The Lord of the Rings as adults, because it can be cumbersome and bogged with detail. But the story’s been a part of my life since my Sesame Street days, so I’m loving this long-overdue reread and needless to say I am QUITE excited about the movie coming out this weekend.

Watching

 

Besides The Hobbit? I’m avoiding watching the final episode of Battlestar Galactica because I’m so, so unwilling for the show to end. I’m also watching so much football I’m starting to dream in Chris Berman’s voice—I have one team in the fantasy football playoffs and I am desperate to win, guys. GO DEMARYIUS THOMAS, GO!

Thinking About

 

This time of year has me thinking about the past. Both in terms of the year about to sunset (as usual it seems to have taken both forever, and a day to pass) and acknowledging and remembering a sad family anniversary that will forever haunt Christmas for me. But that’s the nature of life, and the full intention of the holiday. I won’t forget to think about all the wonderful things still in my life, either.

Anticipating

 

The future (when am I not?): finishing this book, preparing to query. 2012 was a touch stagnant in that regard, so I’m looking forward to a new year.

Wishing

 

Plane tickets weren’t so expensive! Grr.

Making Me Happy

 

Trying to figure out how to make my own silly .gifs on my phone:

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That one’s with the GifShop app, and it’s fun, but I wish it were less choppy! Do any of you have a .gif app you like? (I don’t have Photoshop, so I can’t go the legit route!)

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RTW: On A Reading Mission

by sarahenni on December 12, 2012

Welcome to Road Trip Wednesday day, a ‘Blog Carnival,’ where YA Highway posts a weekly writing- or reading-related question and anyone can answer it on their own blogs. Check out the original post for links to other Road Trippers’ answers!

This week’s topic is: About how many books do you read in a year? Do you want to read more? Or, less?

A peek at part of my TBR pile

Ahh. The last couple of years I’ve set a very lofty goal for reading. In both 2011 and 2012 I hoped to read 100 books. Even with being generous in allowing re-reads to count (once per year), I still fell crazy short of that target, hitting about 50 in 2011 and it looks like I’ll be right around that for this year as well.

My problem is I read in starts and spurts, and much of the time I’m drafting (which has been… all year) it’s sometimes difficult to make time to read, or to find something to read that won’t interfere with my output. This year I stated my goal to read all the Printz-nominated books and, well. That just didn’t come close to happening. I find it very hard to pick up and book and get into it when there’s pressure to read it. (Apparently I am very much a reading diva.)

Still, 50 books in a year is fairly good, and I’d say my hope would be to keep that consistent—maybe make the goal 52 books, or one book a week.

What about you? Do you set reading goals for the year? Have you kept track of the number of books you’ve read?

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Alec Baldwin and Self Improvement

by sarahenni on December 10, 2012

I’ve spent a good amount of my time lately thinking about what “growing up” has been and/or meant to me, post-college. Once those training wheels of organized education were gone, I gained perspective on how I really learn best: trial and error. And failure. When I try, fail, and get ready to try again, I tend to prepare myself better. Preparation includes research and observation.

I was reading Tina Fey’s memoir a few weeks ago and the glowing praise Fey gave her 30 Rock co-star Alec Baldwin caught my attention:

Anything I learned about Real Acting I learned from watching Alec Baldwin. … Alec knows how to let the camera come to him. He can convey a lot with a small movement of his eyes. He speaks so quietly sometimes I can barely hear him when I’m standing next to him, but when you watch the film back, it’s all there. It may not have made me a better actor, but at least now I know why what I’m doing is terrible.

Tina Fey, Bossypants p. 188

Tina Fey may not feel as though noticing what made Alec Baldwin great helped her improve, but she knew, in specific, what he was doing that was different. Making that observation was her first step to improvement. It’s hard to try to be better without identifying what “better” is.

What art form besides writing is as amenable to trying, failing, and editing to improve? First drafts simply don’t get published. I have a special shelf filled with books that gave me those “Alec Baldwin” moments, so I can go back to reference them later. Anna and the French Kiss by Stephanie Perkins when I want to get inspired about voice. Daughter of Smoke and Bone by Laini Taylor when I want to study how to pull a reader into a setting. Where She Went by Gayle Forman for pacing and male POV and so many other things.

What about you? What books or authors give you Alec Baldwin moments? How have those books helped your writing process?

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RTW: A Time To Write, A Time To Revise

by sarahenni on December 5, 2012

Welcome to Road Trip Wednesday day, a ‘Blog Carnival,’ where YA Highway posts a weekly writing- or reading-related question and anyone can answer it on their own blogs. Check out the original post for links to other Road Trippers’ answers!

This week’s topic is: How do you approach editing/revising? Any tips or tricks or resources you can share?

Funny that this should be this week’s topic; I recently sent my manuscript off to beta readers, and I started asking myself this very question. How do I revise? I felt the need to have a system, so I read some wise words from Veronica Roth, and this week’s post by Kristin Cashore, with interest. Eventually, though, revisions boiled down to something quite simple. In flipping through the scenes and individual notes my readers left me, I realized I hadn’t read my book in a while. That sounds dumb, because I’m rereading scenes constantly. But not in order, and rarely more than one or two at a time. My book was, in my mind, a bunch of jagged pieces. I had to find the way to fit them together.

So I printed my book out and read it all the way through. It was painful (so painful), but I forced myself through the flimsy, poorly-written sections knowing I’d subjected my beta readers to it, so I had to be brave. (Eeep!) Then I went back and started a new outline, from scratch, based on my notes and my beta notes. It’s the fourth major overhaul to this WiP’s outline, and somehow I doubt it’ll be the last. So what I’m doing now is tossing the scenes I don’t need (15,000 words, phew!), rewriting the entire beginning (blerg), and revising every single sentence.

It’s time-consuming and can be mentally exhausting (creating a revision goal requires a lot of concentration and extended careful thought), but I can say with only the slightest eye twitch that revisions are definitely my favorite part of writing. Every sentence I tweak, all the words I toss aside, and the plot changes and twists that come about in this stage improve the book exponentially.

What about you?? Any tips or tricks for making revisions work (please)??

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